Christina, nice site. The use of YouTube works well for your poem, but for book reviews I have the following comments: the background piano is a little distracting, the pace is a little too fast to take everything in, also you would be better using your hands more expressively, rather than just waving the book about! If you could also change the camera angle/background a couple of times it would help. Leave a longer gap between the books and do a very brief recap after each one. The reviews themselves are great and your presentation is good, apart from the above points. Hope these ideas are useful. Good luck!
Thank you for your feedback 🙂 I’m always looking for ways to improve and this is very helpful!
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